内容:
痛点破解:为什么背了模板还是卡在6分?因为考官要的不是”高级词汇”,而是”有逻辑的废话”。
方法一:万能论证公式
“PEEL”魔改版:
- Point(观点):直接改写题目句
- Elaborate(扩展):This means that…(用大白话解释)
- Evidence(证据):UNESCO数据显示…(编造权威机构+数据)
- Link(联系):所以如果不这样…就会…(恐吓式结尾)
案例对比:
❌ 原句:城市化导致环境污染
✅ 魔改版:The rapid urbanization(改写题目), which means more people are moving to cities(废话解释), has caused air pollution to increase by 37% according to WHO fake data(伪权威数据). If this continues, citizens may need to wear gas masks by 2050(恐吓预测).
方法二:7天自建语料库
Step1:在Google Scholar搜”research paper conclusion phrases”
Step2:偷20个万能句型如”While further studies are needed…”
Step3:按”赞同/反对/中立”分类存进石墨文档
避坑指南:
× 慎用firstly/secondly(考官看吐了)
✓ 改用primary/secondary/tertiary装逼